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Barry's avatar

Yeah, this is good. I shouldn't have been holding out on reading this. Now I have 17 chapters to catch up on :/

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Jordan Green's avatar

I hope you're still enjoying it, Barry!

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Essy's avatar

A gripping start! My 2 grandkids, 8 and 6 are all in and want more. My granddaughter noticed the phrase about prepping the canoes, does it refer to the fox as a he instead of a she?

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Jordan Green's avatar

Great eye, Essy! I made that pronoun fix. Thank you very much for alerting me, and I hope very much that your grandkids are entertained by these!

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Jody Rutherford's avatar

What an engaging beginning! I can’t wait to hear more. I already love Wil.

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Jordan Green's avatar

Thanks, Jody! Sadly, Wil won’t be a major character through the rest of this, though I am saving him for later.🐗☺️

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