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Sarah Asay's avatar

1. I love all the colors- a fire that’s “warm and tangerine bright”, stars shining in a deepening indigo. I saw all of it without it being overly wordy.

2. The food is perfect northwest fireside food.

3. I’m already intrigued by Ophir’s secret and why Eola can’t be home to watch the grapes ripen.

Can’t wait for more!

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Debbie Green's avatar

Lots of detail. Would love to see illustrations for the creatures.

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